Untitled/unfinished poem

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by mlxjaded, Nov 2, 2011.

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  1. mlxjaded

    mlxjaded Well-Known Member

    All I have left are these bad memories of what could have been
    And although I try so hard to overcome this sin
    I always seem to fall short
    So even when the scars fade away
    I will always remember the internal stain it made
    Each one brings pain
    Each one brings joy
    But I can't take it anymore
    And this isn't what I want for me
    But if I can't change myself for the better
    Then this pain wont go away, no never

    But if I can't change myself for the better
    Then maybe I deserve to stay like this forever
     
  2. Speedy

    Speedy Staff Alumni

    For me, this is the best one yet from you, Mike! My favorite one of all. Bravo! The last four lines are so simple yet relatable feelings. Keep sharing your works, and best regards to you.

    ~ Alex
     
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