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Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Grotesque, Dec 29, 2006.

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  1. Grotesque

    Grotesque Well-Known Member

    liquid delight flows
    spreading sadness about.
    Tears of angst and fervid hate,
    liquid delight cleanses throughout.

    Scars remind of blood held captive,
    strangled fears and irony prevails.
    No one knows the wounds your making
    (when your all alone)
    But everyone sees when your past peels like scales.

    Beauty lacks chance to
    live in this battered heart,
    when everything you've become
    is tearing yourself apart.
     
  2. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member

    I like it, especially the last part
     
  3. Shadowplay

    Shadowplay Staff Alumni

    wow, I also really like the last part :O
     
  4. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    wow...

    that was a great poem.. and i have truly enjoyed your words...

    please post more... as i am a hungry poet that loves reading...

    BP
     
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