Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by thedeafmusician, Jan 5, 2007.

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  1. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    ok... so I've already written about a storm before.... oh well... but title ideas would be good ^^


    there's a change in the air
    it smells funny
    like something is wet
    but there's not a drop of water to be found
    the dam has no water
    instead an empty swirling dustbowl

    the trees seem different
    all the animals can feel it too
    as they scurry around excitedly
    the sky looks the same... it LOOKED the same
    its darkened a bit actually
    sending rain clouds over
    the tiny yellow spikey bits of grass

    underneath it
    the ground is cracked, dry... thirsty
    and waiting...

    everyone is
    or so it seems

    in the distance there is a giant rumble of thunder
    everything freezes
    as we all turn to look up at the sky
    waiting with bated breath

    finally the first drop
    _________ _f
    __________ _a
    of summer rain

    ...i wish
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  2. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    wow that was wonderful...

    thanks for sharing hun...

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