Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Mordeci, Sep 9, 2009.

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  1. Mordeci

    Mordeci Banned Member


    In the city of shadows,
    They cry for salvation,
    The begging for mercy,
    The pleading for damnation,

    In the ruins of light,
    They wait patiently for it to come,
    The screaming of the masses,
    The infinite agony,

    In the darkest corner,
    They see him rise,
    The savior of all,
    The destroyer of life.
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    VEry well written Mordeci somewhat draumatic and dark for me
  3. FallenRyo

    FallenRyo Active Member

    Wonderful, dark is fine I think,
    Ive heard darkness can be beautiful

  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    Brilliant poem :)
  5. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    Here, here. Excellent work.

  6. pither

    pither Well-Known Member

    It's a bit dark- but riveting.
    Nice Job.
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