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Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Mordeci, Oct 11, 2009.

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  1. Mordeci

    Mordeci Banned Member

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    This is where the beginning ends,
    Under the silver lining,
    There is no more hope for anything,
    Here ends all the lying,

    Beneath the soiled sand,
    There lye’s the final siren,
    Screaming at everyone,
    At anyone who will listen,

    Now here comes the end,
    The end to all you’re crying,
    I’ve had enough of it all,
    Finish it for all our begin.
     
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  2. kurenai

    kurenai Well-Known Member

    I love how this poem takes a circular course through the three stanzas, how it begins with the end of something, and ends with a beginning. And how the middle is a just screaming that comes from nowhere- a voice, a message that has no discernable start or end either.
     
  3. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    very good write thanks
     
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Good poem Andrew! :hug:
     
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