Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by approachingnormal, Nov 8, 2009.

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  1. I need someone to care
    I need someone to ask
    I need someone to want to know
    Whats behind this mask

    You never cared
    Ive just been a fool
    I need to go
    Before i lose my cool

    I cant be around you
    If you dont want me
    All i need this time
    Is for you to see

    Find me in my bed
    Silent, cold and gone
    Hand reaching out
    For the help of someone

    My eyes are already dead
    My heart already cold
    All that’s left are two lungs
    Inside a mold

    I dont see the need
    For me to stay
    You wont even notice
    That i am away

    Goodbye my frie-
    uhm, whatever you are
    Just go to your party
    And sit at the bar

    Goodnight for the last time
    I know you wont cry
    So with all this said
    Im just saying goodbye
  2. NoGood

    NoGood Well-Known Member

    wow!!! :hug:
  3. boo

    boo Well-Known Member

    cute poem :smile: loved it
  4. sudut

    sudut Well-Known Member

    Nice poem
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