Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Perfect Melancholy, May 9, 2010.

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  1. Perfect Melancholy

    Perfect Melancholy SF Friend

    And with every heartbeat, the bitter sweet memories fade
    a time so surreal a world so pure so perfect

    Bodies rushing, pulses racing when we were one, the stars
    shined in our heaven

    I promised you, you promised me, we would make it though
    would make it good enough, it would see us through

    To steal a song to steal a line the perfect words that would
    describe this time

    But the pages are empty the words have faded, what is left is gone
    in this heart its all forgiven

    The pages turned the chapters burned.

    Dont ever lose whats you, dont ever lose whats pure open your
    mind and let your wings unfold

    Fly to the stars and play with the light, let it shine over me keeping
    away the dark

    For this i thank you, for this i forgive you, for this i dream of one
    last chance to hold you
  2. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    Very rhythmic and flowing.
  3. Perfect Melancholy

    Perfect Melancholy SF Friend

    Thankyou I hope that motivates me to do more:nerves:
  4. Perfect Melancholy

    Perfect Melancholy SF Friend

    This is a boy, who got left back in time
    while the world moved on
    he was to broken
    but he got better, happier, healthier
    believed it would be easier
    believed it mattered,

    Then he was let down, and found out
    the lies they told
    the truth the hurt
    that still hasn't healed

    And if he ever mattered
    would you lie
    if you ever cared
    would you cry
    and if the truth doesn't matter
    would you tell me why?
  5. Perfect Melancholy

    Perfect Melancholy SF Friend

    She's thinking up dark thoughts inside of her
    thinking tonight's the last chance before she goes
    breathing the suffocating lull of the storm dancing around her now

    Its her last chance she's falling away tonight
    her last chance as she's fading away tonight
    Going so far away in her mind, blocking out all she sees outside

    Tonight I want to hold her to late, the thoughts are already sinking inside
    of her
    Too late thinking to try and her save her
    she cant sleep the dreams taking over her, wanting
    to fade away, let all the pain seep out
    She knows there's no hope wish i could see her, slip inside her dreams, wake
    her from her fears, show her what life is about
    To late these thoughts i could of saved her
    as she sinks deeper into the dark

    Its been too long, I cant explain to her, haunting inside of me, wishing
    what could of been:cry:
  6. Perfect Melancholy

    Perfect Melancholy SF Friend

    Where did all the sad songs go?
    There's nothing playing that I want to know.
    hiding into my pillow searching my head
    all in vein

    Where did the good times go?
    thinking on my own
    where are all the friends I know?
    are they all alive.

    Writing alone, underneath the covers
    leave a light on
    one day I might come home.
  7. Perfect Melancholy

    Perfect Melancholy SF Friend

    She touches the hand of every heart that goes by
    she takes the poison from this pain, she lets me hurt
    then relieves the strain
    she comes in the dark when I need her the most
    she hides away, ready to let me feel again

    With every touch she lets me be again, blood splitting
    through my skin, releasing the poison caught within
    helping me understand all that I have been

    I deserve no less, I fear no more
    I love her when she is beside me mocking my weakness
    I hate it when she leaves me, hating what I have done

    Feel free to leave any comments or feedback, thank you =)
  8. Infinite Sadness

    Infinite Sadness Well-Known Member

    They make me want to hug you.. :hug:

    I think you should write more. I like them.
  9. Perfect Melancholy

    Perfect Melancholy SF Friend

    And as we stand alone how do we mark our time, will we be remembered
    or just remain ghosts caught in time

    who will forget us, the marks we left behind and the imprint on the minds
    of those we loved and cherished

    Should we fall, would we be caught or left to descend to an unknown fate
    will we shed tears as those we forget, or mark the day with out thought or regret

    How many lives would we waste, how many times will it take how many loves turn to hate, before we realise we cannot control this fate

    when will we accept, when will we understand when will we stop this war with ourselves and learn,and live, and breathe, it is not okay it is never okay to feel this way

    With everyday passing every moment we pause and fight for the next breathe, so easy it is to stumble and fall and forget everything we have fought for.........

  10. Perfect Melancholy

    Perfect Melancholy SF Friend


    Give me a day, give me a night just some time to work out my feelings
    Don't leave me now, not alone, not again.
    I said i'm sorry, I said I didn't mean too
    I get so lost deep down in the cloudy blur of my mind, I fight the dark just
    to see your light, how could you leave me now
    just when I was fixing myself

    What's a few more hours a few more days, to pull myself together. I can't see
    for this haze. The dark it gets to bright lost in my world, a child so frightened
    trying to be a man. Look in my eyes see how they plead
    I am dying, I am cold. I need you to hold me, to tell me it's okay

    I know I am weak, don't tell me I am strong, I cannot walk this earth alone
    not now, not with you gone

    I hope I pray, all my angels are dead buried beneath me, I need to feel love,
    I need your safety to breathe your love your life, I thought you could save me
    but I couldn't save you, i'm so sorry
  11. Perfect Melancholy

    Perfect Melancholy SF Friend

    lay the flowers in my orchard and look up to the skies
    let another day pass as I lie there under your lies

    To all those friends who disappeared let me linger with your flowers
    and watch my casket come to lie, send me off with one last cry

    watch the grass pass through me, and the clouds burn up in your eyes
    hold onto my memories and keep them buried deep inside

    Remember me, or forget me, all I am asking is that you please don't
    hate me. A simple selfish act to help ease my mind.​
  12. Perfect Melancholy

    Perfect Melancholy SF Friend


    I stare into the abyss to tired to see
    the beauty the world has to offer me
    I fight I fall clutching at nothing
    when my hope has gone
    my dreams leave me sobbing

    I lose hope I lose sight
    always to hard to see what is in front of me
    the colours are dazzling the light is too bright
    If I could shut my eyes just for one night

    kill these thoughts a prisoner in my mind
    shut of from the world that has left me behind
    I am to far lost, I will never be found

    If I could escape into dream
    I would never want to leave
    if I could shut my eyes and exist in a lie
    a moments peace for a tormented mind
  13. IV2010

    IV2010 Well-Known Member

  14. Perfect Melancholy

    Perfect Melancholy SF Friend

    :hiya: :hugtackles:
  15. Pink Teardrops

    Pink Teardrops Well-Known Member

    :hugtackles: :hug:
  16. Perfect Melancholy

    Perfect Melancholy SF Friend

    not really poetry more a vent sigh anyhow

    Fuck you

    so you think I am only worthy to beat to use to lie
    you only see what's in me when you want something from me
    you never see the real me only what is behind those drunken eyes
    why is it okay to hurt me and fill me with your lies.

    I guess my head is full of nothing and my emotions are all empty
    I guess I am just a toy another one to break
    you get what you need then leave the scene of your crimes
    another train wreck another life
    you destroyed

    how does it feel to own me, to completely and utterly control me
    do you see me when I cry the emptiness you leave behind
    feeling nothing but the poison you put instead
    and the lies you used to control my mind

    The day you took me innocence is the day I died
    and I bet you have no idea how deep my wounds lie
    how I never had a chance once you touched me with
    your hands

    if there is one thing I could say to you now if I could form
    the words and have the nerve, two spring to mind

  17. Pebble

    Pebble Well-Known Member

    wow theres a lot of emotion in that poem :hugtackles: :hug: this is a great way to vent out creatively xx
  18. Perfect Melancholy

    Perfect Melancholy SF Friend

    Thank you Pebble =) it just sort of came out without thinking then I was like uh-huh :unsure: I never think any of them are that good, it is like you say just a way of getting things out :hug:
  19. Pebble

    Pebble Well-Known Member

    They are good :smile: I wish I could write stuff like that, its a less destructive way to release everything that goes around in peoples heads x
  20. Perfect Melancholy

    Perfect Melancholy SF Friend

    thank you =) x
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