Updated version of some lyrics I posted earlier... A song I wrote.

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by SkyW, May 6, 2013.

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  1. SkyW

    SkyW Well-Known Member

    I'm better off a melody
    divided into parts
    fit into any order
    to determine and admire who we are

    You're crowding your eyes
    with impossible distractions
    in an attempt at growing up
    with the best that life can offer
    to a wanting heart

    How can I revise this
    when steps trace back to lousy poetry
    watermarks and stains from oiled skin
    projecting on a pen and paper back to me

    images of words I wrote
    show me friends who know me better now
    I'm not righteous over much
    I just implement what matters most

    I really don't know anyone
    staring through the window pane
    watching cars pass me by
    And I feel like im getting old
    as the day fades
    and the flames turn into embers in the sky

    And all I can see in myself
    is a dishonest means of gain
    thrown into fire to forget
    sift through burnt out memories to discover
    I am selfish, I am greedy, I am incomplete

    But I'll hold my own...
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    You write so beautifully hun i love the words you use
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