Valentine's Day Poem

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  1. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    Valentine’s Day Poem

    I met my love today -
    This Valentine’s Day.
    I looked into eyes
    With depth of soul
    And caring
    And concern.
    And I saw love,
    The real thing,
    Search out my whole.

    “Be mine,” my love whispered
    Into my ear.
    “Be mine, I care.”
    My love stroked my hair.
    “Be mine,
    I’m yours.”
    And I saw me standing there.

    The mirror didn’t lie.
    Looking back at me
    Was I.

    I met my love today,
    This Valentine’s Day.
    And now we’ll never part,
    The two of us are one,
    With one full heart.
    The two of us
    Are ready now
    To share.
    To give one love
    To an outside other
    Who also wants
    Such care.

    I met my love today,
    This Valentine’s Day…
     
  2. itmahanh

    itmahanh Senior Member & Antiquities Friend

    Very nicely done!!
     
  3. Ah...that's what is said - you cannot truly love another, unless you love yourself...

    (so well expressed!)
     
  4. danni

    danni Chat Buddy

    very well done hun
     
  5. Esmeralda

    Esmeralda Well-Known Member

    LOVE the twist :)
     
  6. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    Hi, thanks all. :blink::smile:
     
  7. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    very nice :biggrin:
     
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