'Velvet'

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by curtius, May 26, 2006.

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  1. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    Solemn they bow
    branches
    weighted
    heavy.
    As if lowering
    themselves
    to let me reach
    the burdens
    they carry.
    Embellished
    blessed
    by passing
    seasons,
    decorated
    dressed
    for Heaven
    to see them.
    Bending
    Lending
    the winds
    make their harvest.
    Blowing
    Rapeing
    trying
    their hardest.
    Bounty
    dispersed
    on velvet
    it rests.
    Branches
    bare
    naked
    undressed.
    Burdens
    of nature
    burdens
    of beauty
    it litters
    my velvet
    this fruit
    consumes me.


    ~C
     
  2. Speechless,
    for how you feel, and feel for others;
    solemn thank you

    FAL1
     
  3. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    Thank you FAL1.....
     
  4. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    so beautiful...

    its simply put...

    Loved it alot...

    and i still love your work to this day...

    BP
     
  5. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I always love your work:smile: - it's always fresh and new and a whole different way of seeing everyday things and feelings. You're a genius, you are! And I'm glad to be your friend!!:smile: :smile:

    love,

    least
     
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