VERY Short Poem (Again) =D {4 lines}

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by AlexElm, Feb 1, 2011.

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  1. AlexElm

    AlexElm Well-Known Member

    I never knew happiness,
    I was always in the blues.
    I never knew about love,
    Until I met you.


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    I admit this one isn't as good, but for me, it's good for me to get these rhymes out of my head =D

    Please tell me what you think.

    Just so you know....
    :poo:
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    It is cute and i rhyme all the time when i am trying to get thoughts out of my head hugs
     
  3. hollowvoice

    hollowvoice Senior Member & Antiquities Friend

    short and sweet
    i love to rhyme too
     
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