Viewing My Faults

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Sadeyes, Oct 21, 2010.

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  1. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    Anger is a defense against sadness;
    Distance, against closeness.
    Until we see ourselves in the mirror,
    we will not see ourselves.
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    that is an excellent poem so well stated
     
  3. hollowvoice

    hollowvoice Senior Member & Antiquities Friend

    brilliant,i love the mirror part,i look in a mirror i see hate.
     
  4. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    Thanks V...and Andi, if you see hate, change the mirror image...J
     
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  5. dartofabaris

    dartofabaris Well-Known Member

    beautiful display of truth sadeyes;

    while sadness darkens with clouds to your sky,
    anger reddens by clouding your eyes.

    hence we are no longer allied to our happiness, we merely push it further and further till it slips just beyond our reach, in some cases beneath the very horizon of our sight.

    distance against closeness, too true to be spoken of!

    personally i shy away from my own reflection, its too real.
     
  6. sudut

    sudut Well-Known Member

    "I'm Starting With The Man In
    The Mirror
    (Ooh!)
    I'm Asking Him To Change
    His Ways
    (Ooh!)
    And No Message Could Have
    Been Any Clearer
    If You Wanna Make The World
    A Better Place
    (If You Wanna Make The
    World A Better Place)
    Take A Look At Yourself And
    Then Make A Change..."
     
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