Void

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  1. Jokalo

    Jokalo Member

    Void, canceled, simply annulled.
    Endlessly aching, unconsoled.
    Life without you, cause without reason.
    Touch without sense, time without season.
    I face life now facing a cancerous sore,
    A sordid parasite that eats at my core.
    All that makes me whole, all I hold deep within,
    Leaving me lifeless, or at least not livin'.

    A shallow face, anguished and marred.
    An empty space, scaled and scarred.
    Sweetly abiding to a cynical charade.
    Secretly hiding 'hind a fictitious facade.
    Still, lost within this heart of glass,
    This fragile and yet unfeeling mass.
    Lies the remains of a love that glowed,
    The gift to you I once bestowed.

    But honor and pride now bereaved-
    By your love for me so misconceived,
    Ripped from my inner depths, impeding-
    Mind and body and spirit, bleeding;
    Now's crushed to sand from thy ruthless hand,
    A cold stare I just can't understand.
    I feel that somehow, somehow I'm dying,
    At least my soul and all that's underlying.

    A simple void, is that what I've become?
    The hollowed sphere on a pendulum.
    Swinging back and forth, emotion to emotion,
    Never once stopping, nor slowing the motion.
    No reason, no answer, no justification.
    The creation of a sterile imagination.
    Just passing through time as time passes me.
    Merely a nothing- nothing, merely, left to be.
    Sightless and soundless, unseen and unheard.
    Mindless and boundless, obscure and absurd.
    All empathy lying ungraced, unemployed,
    I live my life dying, unembraced, a void.​
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    You certainly have a way with word with rhyme speaks of your pain from the inside. I hope you continue venting this way.
     
  3. The Unforgiven

    The Unforgiven Well-Known Member

    its beautiful.
    at the risk of sounding pretentious, i still have to say, youre one of our kind lol. we who have a heart beat with words instead of rhythm. ive read something so stirring after so long....
    keep writing. it helps, let it all out.
    hope you feel better.
    :hug:
     
  4. me myself and i

    me myself and i Account Closed

    Great poem, enjoyed it lots, but Charles Manson did it all to himself and was a nasty evil man.
     
  5. Cute_Angel_Xx

    Cute_Angel_Xx Account Closed

  6. The Unforgiven

    The Unforgiven Well-Known Member

    this is a copy paste?? :eek:hmy:
     
  7. absolution

    absolution Forum Buddy

    or maybe he just submitted it there to?
     
  8. The Unforgiven

    The Unforgiven Well-Known Member

    name doesnt match.... :?
    *feels really stupid now* :/
     
  9. Cute_Angel_Xx

    Cute_Angel_Xx Account Closed

    It's done by a famouse poet. It all over the internet this poem but with the author, you didn't know ahurtlikeakittykat so no need to feel stupid :hug: x
     
  10. absolution

    absolution Forum Buddy

    ahh okay. Maybe he just forgot?
     
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