Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Jokalo, Jan 11, 2011.

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  1. Jokalo

    Jokalo Member

    Void, canceled, simply annulled.
    Endlessly aching, unconsoled.
    Life without you, cause without reason.
    Touch without sense, time without season.
    I face life now facing a cancerous sore,
    A sordid parasite that eats at my core.
    All that makes me whole, all I hold deep within,
    Leaving me lifeless, or at least not livin'.

    A shallow face, anguished and marred.
    An empty space, scaled and scarred.
    Sweetly abiding to a cynical charade.
    Secretly hiding 'hind a fictitious facade.
    Still, lost within this heart of glass,
    This fragile and yet unfeeling mass.
    Lies the remains of a love that glowed,
    The gift to you I once bestowed.

    But honor and pride now bereaved-
    By your love for me so misconceived,
    Ripped from my inner depths, impeding-
    Mind and body and spirit, bleeding;
    Now's crushed to sand from thy ruthless hand,
    A cold stare I just can't understand.
    I feel that somehow, somehow I'm dying,
    At least my soul and all that's underlying.

    A simple void, is that what I've become?
    The hollowed sphere on a pendulum.
    Swinging back and forth, emotion to emotion,
    Never once stopping, nor slowing the motion.
    No reason, no answer, no justification.
    The creation of a sterile imagination.
    Just passing through time as time passes me.
    Merely a nothing- nothing, merely, left to be.
    Sightless and soundless, unseen and unheard.
    Mindless and boundless, obscure and absurd.
    All empathy lying ungraced, unemployed,
    I live my life dying, unembraced, a void.​
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    You certainly have a way with word with rhyme speaks of your pain from the inside. I hope you continue venting this way.
  3. The Unforgiven

    The Unforgiven Well-Known Member

    its beautiful.
    at the risk of sounding pretentious, i still have to say, youre one of our kind lol. we who have a heart beat with words instead of rhythm. ive read something so stirring after so long....
    keep writing. it helps, let it all out.
    hope you feel better.
  4. me myself and i

    me myself and i Account Closed

    Great poem, enjoyed it lots, but Charles Manson did it all to himself and was a nasty evil man.
  5. Cute_Angel_Xx

    Cute_Angel_Xx Account Closed

  6. The Unforgiven

    The Unforgiven Well-Known Member

    this is a copy paste?? :eek:hmy:
  7. absolution

    absolution Forum Buddy

    or maybe he just submitted it there to?
  8. The Unforgiven

    The Unforgiven Well-Known Member

    name doesnt match.... :?
    *feels really stupid now* :/
  9. Cute_Angel_Xx

    Cute_Angel_Xx Account Closed

    It's done by a famouse poet. It all over the internet this poem but with the author, you didn't know ahurtlikeakittykat so no need to feel stupid :hug: x
  10. absolution

    absolution Forum Buddy

    ahh okay. Maybe he just forgot?
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