Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Almostgone, Jul 17, 2009.

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  1. Almostgone

    Almostgone Member


    I can hear time
    It sounds like your laugh
    It feels like your skin
    Like nothing I will ever experience again.
    I wait for you in my dreams with my eyes wide open
    Knowing how to reach you but being too afraid
    Praying for the courage to burn without
    Pain being my constant companion
    My tired and weary soul bleeds as it feeds my addiction
    So I wait
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Good poem sharon :)
  3. Almostgone

    Almostgone Member

    Thank you very much. I appreciate all feedback. This time of year is sooo hard. I miss my husband.
  4. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    i am sorry you are lonely right now and missing your husband Is there anyway you can visit a relative or friend at this time. Your poem is well written conveys the suffering you are in I hope you can keep busy go out with friends take care.
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