Waiting

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by NoMoneyToPlease, Jan 5, 2011.

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  1. NoMoneyToPlease

    NoMoneyToPlease Banned Member

    gull overhead
    aware yellow eyes watch white spray rise up from clashing churning gray
    and you
    unmissable in bright rescue orange
    bobbing on the storm floor
    a different bird with familiar insides searches for you
     
  2. ~Young-Violet~

    ~Young-Violet~ Banned Member

    Aww, thats sweet. I think I got it after the sixth time I read it :) but over all that was a greatt mini poem :hug:
     
  3. NoMoneyToPlease

    NoMoneyToPlease Banned Member

    Thank you for the kind praise. :)


    May I praise you for being so praisefull?

    I shall.

    You rock. :)
     
  4. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I like your picturesque poem short and very descriptive and thought prevoking
     
  5. NoMoneyToPlease

    NoMoneyToPlease Banned Member

    Why thank you,you lovely human being and moderator capacity person of merit. :)
     
  6. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    now you made me laugh thanks
     
  7. ~Young-Violet~

    ~Young-Violet~ Banned Member

    Aww, thanks lol haha, you've got me to laugh to :D
     
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