Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by longingforpeace, Sep 29, 2006.

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  1. longingforpeace

    longingforpeace Active Member

    Walls go up
    Communication shuts down
    Isolation sets in
    And there is silence all around

    Left here with my thoughts
    Echoing in my head
    Anxiously awaiting
    The cutting words I dread

    What started off so promising
    I destroyed with great ability
    What held so much potential
    I bludgeoned to death with agility

    Every one I touch turns to stone
    And crumbles down to dust
    Every thing I cherish
    Corrodes with choking rust

    Kneeling before my grave as a ghost
    Dead flowers in my hand
    Weeping for all that could have been
    In a grey, colorless land
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Wow!:eek:hmy: That's awesome!!:smile: Very beautifully expressed tho very sad.:sad:

    Thanks for sharing your feelings with us. I hope you feel better about yourself. It helps to write about that stuff, I know.

  3. longingforpeace

    longingforpeace Active Member

    Thank you for the compliment. It really does help me to write. Also, I find that reading can be a great escape when one feels sad.
  4. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    only a soul that has felt as deeply as you have, can write as poetically as you do...big hugs, Jackie
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