wana die

Discussion in 'I Have a Question...' started by fallingangie, Aug 16, 2011.

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  1. fallingangie

    fallingangie Well-Known Member

    how long hav i been in dis storm
    so overwhelmed by the ocean's shapeless form
    waters gettin harder to tread
    wid dese waves crashing over my head.
    n i will walk on water

    knw u didnt brin me out here to drown
    so y m i ten feet under n upside down
    barely surviving has become my purpose
    cuz im so used to living underneath the surface
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    wow great poem hun I hope you learn to live a little more above that surface hugs to you.
  3. Jelly

    Jelly Well-Known Member

    Love it. Beautiful contrast. <3
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