Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Terry, May 21, 2008.

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  1. Terry

    Terry Antiquities Friend Staff Alumni

    Wandering in the silent halls
    Of corridors without walls
    Silence drips inside the mind
    Where memories defined
    Are etched in blood.
    Silence because no one hears
    Here within the quiet tears.
    Wandering on into the void,
    Where nothingness we here avoid
    And loneliness reigns.
    Each wrapped in their own misery
    Each carrying their own history.
    The floors are wet from tears shed
    Each trapped inside their own head.
    Wandering in the silent halls of the mind.
  2. Lead Savior

    Lead Savior Well-Known Member

    We'll make it out of the halls Terreh. Just need to keep trying different paths, process of elimination.
  3. aki

    aki Well-Known Member

    I think you're talented, I can really identify with this poem.
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    great poem:smile:
  5. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I like it very much and can SO identify with your beautiful poem.:smile: More, please!
  6. Sa Palomera

    Sa Palomera Well-Known Member

    beautiful terrs, thanks :hug:
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