Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Lowcorn, May 27, 2006.

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  1. Lowcorn

    Lowcorn Active Member

    When water flows, it dose not stop. It just goes on and on. If you jump in without a thot. It will take you far and long. You will not stop, but only go, Thew sunshine and winters snow. The water will take youfar and wide, away to a bright and happy day. Away from the pain, Away from sorrow, to a happy place called tomarow.

    I write this for all the people who like me feel that every day is the worst. I find that looking forward to the next day and what it will bring keeps me going.


  2. Thanks for that Dylan. That's touching and kind. It reminds me greatly of the beginning of the book called "Illusions" by Richard Bach. Think you'd dig it. Maybe I need to re-read it myself again...

  3. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    Made me smile... thankyou for sharing. :hug:

  4. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    it was great reading this poem...

    thanks for sharing...

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