Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by curtius, Jun 6, 2006.

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  1. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    Eyes are heavy
    Missing person
    But clearly
    Within the bright
    But shade invades
    Steals the light
    What doesn't kill me
    Makes me stronger
    If only I
    Knew how much longer...

  2. *sigh*


  3. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    I could have cared less to write anything today...

    Im so fucking angry and I dont even care.

  4. smotherman

    smotherman Member

    I love your work Curtius,Simply amazing!
  5. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    I was angry with you...its why I wrote it...

  6. smotherman

    smotherman Member

    angry with me? I thought we felt connected and started to became great friends!

    I know this probably don't mean much, but I'd love you unconditionally, happy, angry/pissed off ,mood swings etc etc
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  7. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    Just a moment of frustration...as you know.

    Unfortunately I have these things called MOOD SWINGS lol...

    I still love you S...

    People like you have a way of filling my heart.

  8. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni


    Excellent!!:smile: Another brilliant and succinct piece of work - you amaze and inspire me.


    Sorry you were feeling so angry, at least you can express it on paper, a more theraputic and less damaging way of venting.

    I love the last four lines... brilliant!
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  9. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member


    you are still amazing me every step of the way...

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