Well of nothingness

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by xoCherie, Mar 18, 2012.

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  1. xoCherie

    xoCherie Well-Known Member

    Glancing at it, it's nothing special
    Made of bricks and mortar
    A rope hangs down
    Down into the abyss
    Just another well to the onlooker

    Stepping closer you will see
    The writing engraved into the bricks
    "Death" "decay" "lost hope"
    Stand out among the rest

    With a sigh and a heavy heart
    You will step closer still
    One step
    Two step
    Until you're at the edge

    It looms above you one second
    A great height to be conquered
    Only to change the next
    To be spiralling down beneath you

    Reaching out, your hands take hold
    Of the rope that hangs there so innocently
    And you wonder
    How many other lives has this well destroyed?
  2. Speedy

    Speedy Staff Alumni

    My often-confused mind reads deeply into your words....please take care and thanks for sharing. :hug:
  3. xoCherie

    xoCherie Well-Known Member

    I find the best poetry is started from just a few words that are in my head, that build and build, until it's finished
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