What have i become(may trigger)

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by rosky71, Aug 1, 2009.

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  1. rosky71

    rosky71 Well-Known Member

    ok this is my second poem,hopefully i improved from the first. but none the less read it and give me feedback good or bad i dont care

    what have i become
    im nothing but a ghost, i am numb
    since you left ive been dead
    nothing but a ghost crying on his bed
    all i want is for you to be here
    just to make these feelings dissapear

    what have i become
    im nothing but a waste of life, i am scum
    since you left life is meaningless
    nothing left to but confess
    all i want is to be dead
    im saying goodbye with the gun to my head
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  2. triggs

    triggs Account Closed

    :eek:hmy: this is amazing hun! :hug: hope you're okay xx
  3. rosky71

    rosky71 Well-Known Member

    well thank you once again, and im ok its just seem to get more depressed latley
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    aww,sad poem but its good hun :hug:
  5. Almostgone

    Almostgone Member

    It's beautiful. I hope you are ok, and we all need to remember, it's not dead that we really want, it is escape from pain. We just don't feel like we have options other than the big sleep. I will be thinking about you and your effecting poem.
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