What is Left is Me

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by InnerStrength, Dec 20, 2006.

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  1. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member

    Here is a poem I wrote during a period where I felt isolated. I still do, in a way, but it doesn't bother me as much.


    "What is Left is Me"

    Sitting alone among a thousand graves of perception
    I see what is happening, a festering of reflection
    Bring back those insignificant memories
    They can’t do me any harm

    What is Left is Me
    And what came before this made me see
    We have been, and always will be alone in thought
    An unreachable island of consciousness
    Surrounded by that black, quiescent abyss of water

    What is Left is Me
    Unchangeable through eternity
    Forever in the shadows of obscurity
    Will you ever know me?
     
  2. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    :clap: I liked it hun!!! :clap:
     
  3. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member

    thanks PainNSiolence...I wasn't expecting a response so quickly.
     
  4. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    I can kinda understand where you are coming from in it... I really like it, you are a great poet. I use to write poetry and post i here, but I seem to have lost it. :dry:


    But thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem!





    :hug: :hug:
     
  5. That is so beautifully expressed - all the feelings...


    FAL1
     
  6. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I like it very much - very beautifully expressed and lovely read aloud!:smile:

    least
     
  7. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member

    Again, thanks for the compliments. This was one of my better poems. I've been trying to write more of them, but I feel so...uninspired, lately.
     
  8. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    i know the feeling it seems all to real if anything...

    BP
     
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