When Insanity Becomes Reality

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Courtz, Jan 20, 2011.

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  1. Courtz

    Courtz Well-Known Member

    The reason why i hate my life
    is not to clear to see
    the reason why i hate my life
    is trivial to you not me

    the reason why i hate my life
    is because i am still alive
    the reason why i hate my life
    is because i can never hide

    the reason why i hate my life
    is because i am filled with sorrow
    the reason why i hate my life
    is because there will never be a tomorrow

    the reason why i hate my life
    is because i will never be free
    the reason why i hate my life
    is because you are oblivious to see....
     
  2. ~Young-Violet~

    ~Young-Violet~ Banned Member

    You have used a great use of rhyme and rhythm, this is a beautiful poem so expressing and emotional, I do hope you see the light side of things soon x :hug: x
     
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