When?

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Terry, Dec 17, 2010.

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  1. Terry

    Terry Antiquities Friend Staff Alumni

    When I'm gone...
    Will you notice my face looked tear stained?
    When I'm gone....
    Will you finally hear how my voice strained?
    When I'm gone...
    Will you see that I had had enough?
    When I'm gone...
    Will you finally see I was not so tough?
    When I'm gone.....
    Will you miss me?
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Nice write I am sure you will be missed greatly
     
  3. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    While you are here we care deeply for you...big hugs
     
  4. shades

    shades Staff Alumni

    Well...that made me cry...probably would have even if I didn't know you. But, I do and that makes it all the more sad! I hope this is not at the forefront of your thoughts right now. Please write when you feel up to it! I miss you terribly!

    Mike
     
  5. IV2010

    IV2010 Well-Known Member

    I hear you :arms:
     
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