where's my allelujah?

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Habit45, Feb 6, 2006.

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  1. Habit45

    Habit45 Guest

    Where's my allelujah

    I praised and prayed your name
    your son is a liar to survive in your world
    expect me to see you as a messiah
    Your a proffesser, we are the rats

    Call me Rat "X"

    Your nothing but the force
    behing our society of lies

    We frequent this board
    how many survive

    Centuries of hurt
    never ending wars
    carried out in YOUR name
    we sacrificed it all

    ****mod edit-sarah-member requested edit***

    Eternal life? is that for what we strive
    the only peace inside
    Is the eternal bliss you offer
    Ok, wheres my allelujah

    I'm waiting.......... what FOOLS we must be

    Did i not pray hard enough?
    did i worship false idols?
    did I spill my seed on my duvet too much?
    well you didn't bless the land with perfection
    just corruption, and orgasms

    Then I remember
    Allelujah exists
    A submissive subconcious
    thats the hell you created

    your sincerely Lord
    Rat "X"
     
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  2. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    That was a fantistic poem *sorry about spelling*

    I really liked it...
     
  3. Habit45

    Habit45 Guest

    Cheers, I read it back and thought people might find it a tad rascist. I'm not a rascist and i don't dismiss anyones religion.
     
  4. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    Some might...But I doubt they will take offence now that you had meantioned it.
     
  5. Habit45

    Habit45 Guest

    The way its written doesn't represent me as a person it was just to show how stupid competition between religion is, bieng ironic i think. Apologies to anyone it might offend, i'm trying to get the poem removed.
     
  6. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    I wouldnt remove it...because its how you feel...you could edit the poem, and use a different context...but i wouldnt get rid of it persay...
     
  7. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    :hug:
     
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