Which one do you like best?

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Which Poem Do You Like Best?

  1. I see

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  2. Pain

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  1. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    Which of my poems do you like best?




    -I SEE-

    I see distorted images,
    and the little girl being abused,
    I see the devil, selling his cars,
    I see the look of not caring I see the look of the unknown,
    I see flashes of light,
    I see things that aren't real,
    I see the people who hurt the little girl,
    I see people who hurt the little girl but she still stays numb but still craves them to need her,
    I see the images of death,
    I see fear,
    I see a black hole,
    I see a drain with blood flowing down it,
    I see pain everywhere,
    I see hatered,
    I see children and wonder are they being hurt,
    I see shadows on the dark,
    I see the the darkness,
    I see people and fear which one will hurt me,
    I see love sometimes and want it crave it,
    I see failure,
    I see hopeless,
    I see helplessnes,
    I see emptiness of the little girl,
    I see that her soul was taken a long time ago,
    I see a distorted child who never goes away.





    -PAIN-

    I knew pain as a child i thought it'd go away,
    But I kept getting older and it just got worse, all the pain,
    I've been violated, the pain remains,
    I have been cheated, the pain remains,
    I have been beaten, the pain remains,
    I have been dominated, the pain remains,
    I have been hurt so many times, the pain remains,
    I still live constantly getting hurt, and the pain remains,
    I keep lettin myself get hurt, the pain remains,
    I care too much and do too much and yet, the pain remains,
    I know nothing but pain, and it will remain.
     
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