Who am i?

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by kindtosnails, Dec 6, 2006.

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  1. kindtosnails

    kindtosnails Staff Alumni

    I know it isnt good, and its pointless but I don't care..
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    Who am i?
    i'm You in the mirror

    When i'm alone?
    i'm sick
    Twisted
    i'm the brander, cutter, burner
    i'm the one who drinks 'til there's none left
    Then gets more.

    i'm the one one who's forgotten her name
    And doesn't care.
    i'm the one who doesn't know who to be.
    i'm the pretender
    Imitator

    i'm the one who needs to please You
    And fails

    i'm the one who doesnt deserve to start a sentence with "I"

    i'm the one who doesn't even exist.

    i'm the one who's a figment of Your imagination
    A ghost in Your mirror
    To make You feel better


    Who am i?

    i'm the one
    Who's gone.
     
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  2. Shadowplay

    Shadowplay Staff Alumni

    I like it a lot. :hug:
     
  3. blub

    blub Guest

    Ah bleu :hug: its beautifull, but you are so much more :cheekkiss
     
  4. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    wow....

    it was really good hun!!!!

    BP
     
  5. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Lovely expression of your feelings, just wish they weren't so sad...:sad:

    love,

    least

    PS; you are more than you think you are...
     
  6. {i'm the one who doesnt deserve to start a sentence with "I"}

    That alone (aside from the rest of the poem) is one *helluva* statememt about how so many of us feel. Way powerful...way.........

    FAL1
     
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