Who i am.

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by ThornThatNeverHeals, Apr 21, 2012.

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  1. ThornThatNeverHeals

    ThornThatNeverHeals Well-Known Member

    Cold in my heart
    lonliness in my soul
    wont you know who i am?

    im shivering now
    nothing will stop it
    i doubt you know then.

    im no saint
    you just dont see inside
    it would give the devil shivers

    is escapes through the cuts
    oh, beautiful at on my skin,
    pain like needles and slivers.

    wait, but it doesnt stop there
    thats what few people know
    i can do worse to me.

    have you seen an eraserburn?
    how about frostbite on a gut?
    on my skin, these i have seen.

    there is of course worse
    but nothing need you know
    this picture is ungly enough.

    now look at this girl,
    shivering with agony inside
    its you whom she trusts.

    this is to my friends on here whom have helped me, along with my friend who supports me when im suicidal, my boyfriend, and my math teacher who deals with all my bullshit.... thanks for being there for me everybody, its what keeps me going.
     
  2. Dubstepper

    Dubstepper Staff Alumni

    its really pretty hun.. i like it!
     
  3. scarlettdrknss

    scarlettdrknss Well-Known Member

    that's an awesome poem ^^ and a wonderful way to thank those people =]
     
  4. Speedy

    Speedy Staff Alumni

    Hello, Thorn....thank you, too, for being you....keep writing. :)
     
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