Who in the night

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by OneDesire, Mar 5, 2011.

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  1. OneDesire

    OneDesire Member

    There is eeriness about
    underneath this night awake,
    where nocturnal geckos roam
    solid walls begin to break.
    There are echoes in mirrors
    and the face is like an owl.
    All I ever hear is “Who?”
    I can’t answer that one now.
    There is silence in between
    every echoed gecko’s sound.
    There’s intention in my mind
    numbed by liquor that I found.
    But every time this gecko
    crawls along my breaking walls,
    I’d love to trace the slither
    just until the dawn break calls.

    By Emma King
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  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    i like it very much hugs
  3. Terry

    Terry Antiquities Friend Staff Alumni

    I absolutely love this!
  4. OneDesire

    OneDesire Member

    Thank you both =)
  5. Julia-C

    Julia-C Well-Known Member

    Yeah guys, Emma can write. I know her from another forum, and she has some real talent.

    Emma I enjoyed it too.
  6. OneDesire

    OneDesire Member

    Julia! I've missed you. We haven't talked in a few days :p

    Anyways...I'm not THAT great... >.< But thank you :p
  7. Julia-C

    Julia-C Well-Known Member

    Dear, I just been really sick. Been trying to get over all of it.

    Yes you are a great writer, and you will only get better. :smile:
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