Who would see

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by BornFree, Sep 17, 2012.

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  1. BornFree

    BornFree Well-Known Member

    Fading into oblivion invisible as ever
    Who would see or care I never
    Found a way out of this hole
    Fragmented shattered never to be whole

    Have tried my utmost & now lie empty & used
    Lost alone hurt & abused
    All sorts of emotions spilling over set free
    From its casket that in my heart be

    Explosively cascading till only emptiness remains
    With nothing else left for my heart to contain
    Do I slip away unoticed invisible
    My life & soul incredibly unmendable

    To make way for others lives a new
    Leave unnoticed & words are few
    Out with the old & in with the new metaphorically
    Carving a path for fresh feet to pass categorically

    Always cyclic round & round the circle of life
    Who would care or miss their wife
    Or mother & carer who would see
    If one day I was no longer to be...
  2. NYJmpMaster

    NYJmpMaster Have a question? Message Me Staff Member Forum Owner ADMIN

    :hug: I would like to think none are as invisible as they feel some times- overlooked and under appreciated happen far too often but even a child that forgets to say thank you but stills uses the gift given everyday has really shown their need and appreciation far more than an empty "thanks".
    You touch people more than you or they know or realize, and that is your contribution to the cycle - be safe Ditsy - and keep sharing your poems please - they are very good.
  3. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    This is so poignant and so sad, but know how much I care
  4. souncide

    souncide Well-Known Member

    Probably one of the most beautiful things I've read.
  5. Songie

    Songie Well-Known Member

    I agree with everyone..beautiful, well written, moving...and so sad. I'd love to see more writing from you.. you're very talented :)
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