Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by eih, Oct 18, 2006.

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  1. eih

    eih Well-Known Member

    I'm really not much of a poet... it just seemed to happen:blink: ....

    A burden to great to bear
    all alone, looking for someone to care

    been let down again and again
    future lookin dreadfully dim

    looking for someone to light my way...
    cause I dont wanna owe my due, in the ultimate price to pay

    who in this world can I possibly trust
    goin againts my instinks, oh I must

    Darkest of red smuthers thine shinging doom
    happy + fine they all assume

    I cant take this anymore
    my soul hurts deep down to the coe

    it hurts so bad, inside and out
    I still got my worries and my doubts

    I reach my hand out to yours
    oh god please tell me it wont be ignored

    you take my hand with the firmest grip
    I can feel myself slowly climbin outta my crypt..

    you've given me a shoulder to cry
    you tell me not to say good bye

    tellin me it'll get better soon
    tellin me to escape my doom

    it means more than I can say to know that you care
    we all know life cant always be fair

    but I hate myself for what I've dropped on you
    you say dont worry we'll see it through

    now I write this poem for you
    let it express what I could never do
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I like it a lot! :smile: I also think the one for whom it was written should be flattered as hell - I would be, if it had been written for me!:smile: :smile:

    Thanks for sharing it with us.

  3. eih

    eih Well-Known Member

    thank u theleastofthese :smile: ...ha.. thanks.. I dunno if he'll be flattered .. or even see it for that matter.. but I hope he knows how much he's helped..

    neway.. thx again
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