Who's that come a knockin'

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by jameslyons, Mar 2, 2009.

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  1. jameslyons

    jameslyons Well-Known Member

    Who's that come a knockin'
    so early at my bedroom door?
    tis landlord landlords!
    Forlorn,
    mind cogs turn and tongue unhinge-
    "Is that today? Well I'll be"
    quickly now, while their back is turned
    out the window-
    missing both coat and drawers.








    A general PSA: Don't live in the same town as your landlords.
     
  2. Alais

    Alais Well-Known Member

    I like this. I'm a little strange, but it smacks to me of nursery rhyme style. Never fear, though. I hate the fuckin' landlords, too.
     
  3. jameslyons

    jameslyons Well-Known Member

    Thanks.
     
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    I liked it :D
     
  5. shades

    shades Staff Alumni

    Well done James!
     
  6. phoenixdrake

    phoenixdrake Guest

    First few lines sound as if out of the Raven by Edgar Allen Poe. Nice work James.
     
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