Why Are We Alive?

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Twocky61, Jun 23, 2014.

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  1. Twocky61

    Twocky61 Banned Member

    Why are we alive
    Why do we everyday strive?
    What is the point of it all?
    While we try to stay on the ball
    Trying to keep our drive

    It would be so easy to just go to sleep
    No more would we weep
    It would all come to an end
    No more energy to spend
    Our lives under the carpet sweep

    For me only one things keeps me going
    Claire is her name who I am forever loving
    She is so beautiful
    Keeping my cup full
    She is all knowing

    In the morning when we awake
    She is my cream cake
    My doughnut
    Nothing but
    For my sake

    Here she is sat beside me as I type
    Looking serene quite
    We kiss so tenderly
    Her tears I wipe
  2. emily83

    emily83 Well-Known Member

    when i saw this post, i thought it was an open debate, and i was ready to give my views on it. (lol)

    but, a poem:)

    you write a lot about clair. she must mean an aweful lot
  3. Twocky61

    Twocky61 Banned Member

    'course it can be a debate so you can say about your loved one if you like Emily
  4. emily83

    emily83 Well-Known Member

    living is a trick.

    even if you have it made (you have everything you want), it's just taken away from you eventually

    you can chooce your occupation, you can choose your lifestyle, you can choose what you wear, who you are etc.

    but what does it mean in the end.

    with me, being suicidal anyway, i don't care.

    as far as i'm concerned you're born, you breav, you suffer daily, then you die in silence.

    but you get my point
  5. Twocky61

    Twocky61 Banned Member

    Exactly Emily
  6. Hatshepsut

    Hatshepsut Guest

    So, Claire is a bear. I never thought of that possibility :)
  7. youRprecious!

    youRprecious! Antiquities Friend

    I'd ever so gently like to disagree with you Emily, although I do know that what you wrote is how it can appear if you believe that this is all we do, get born (with no choice in the matter), learn how to breathe, eat, learn, choose some stuff and then it all gets taken away - as if there was absolutely nothing else in the universe that could give existence any sort of deeper motivational meaning. The trick is, if, after consultation with yourself, you make the choice of becoming open/interested in finding the deeper meaning to Why Are We Alive :) And that is another choice we have, sadly so many decide that they are not - that's not a judgement but an observation. :)
  8. Twocky61

    Twocky61 Banned Member

    Well when she is BARE she is very sexy lol
  9. Twocky61

    Twocky61 Banned Member

    Actually though she is a bit like a bear as she is round & cuddly rather like Lisa Jane Riley who played Mandy Dingle in Emmerdale lol

    Mandy Dingle's official website lol
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