why? *trig* plz read :)

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by SmilePretty, Dec 11, 2006.

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  1. SmilePretty

    SmilePretty Staff Alumni

    Waiting here with eyes serene,
    Not knowing that you'll make me unclean

    sitting here waiting with an open heart,
    Your so called love will tear me apart.

    You told me that love might hurt,
    You told me that as you lifted my shirt.

    I started to shake, you held me tight,
    That's when i realised that this wasn't right.

    Then i started to kick, and i started to scream
    I wanted to wake from the horrible dream.

    You came inside, you hurt me so bad,
    You took away the only innocence i had.

    You hurt me and you have to reply,
    To the question i ask, to the question...why?
  2. Terry

    Terry Antiquities Friend Staff Alumni

  3. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni

    I've actually written a poem quite like this.

    I may still have it around somewhere. I've had to keep it out of my sight though, it's so emotional.

    I love this. So honest. So true.

  4. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Dear Fear;

    THis is very very powerful and moving.:eek:hmy: It's hard for me to read also, it reminds me of a Bad Time long ago.:sad:


  5. LSD

    LSD Well-Known Member

    geez.. i'm sorry

    ..this reminds me sad times too =/
  6. ~Nobody~

    ~Nobody~ Well-Known Member

    I got chills all over me.

    Oh sweetheart :cry:

  7. Marshmallow

    Marshmallow Staff Alumni

    Hun thats made me all teary eyed, im about to burst into tears, thats a very moving poem, very sad :sad:

  8. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    *agrees with all of the above...*

    :( :hug:

  9. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    wow... your pain in this one shows big time...

    i know what it feels like...

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