'Witness'

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by curtius, May 25, 2006.

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  1. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    Drop little hints
    Here and there as I pass
    Scrub the deposits
    Off my looking glass
    Shine my reflection
    Leave no indication
    Loneliness plagueing
    Virus invasion
    Anonomous tears
    Fall where I've stepped
    Tears that you'll never
    Know that I've wept
    Why can't you know
    That I need to speak
    Cant you understand
    The reasons I weep?
    Why can't you see
    The things that I need?
    Help me retain
    The colours I bleed...
    Witness me falling
    Watch unafraid
    Wait at the bottom
    Save me I pray?


    ~C
     
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    (((Curtius)))

    You've done it again!!!:eek:hmy: These incredible words just keep coming out of your head, much to my delight and awe and shared understanding.:smile: Keep 'em coming, and thank you for sharing with us!

    theleast
     
  3. Witness me falling
    Watch unafraid
    Wait at the bottom
    Save me I pray?

    I think I've been waiting at the bottom all my days - can't 'save' anyone - but I make a helluva witness. Sometimes, it seems, that's not the bad part of the journey. I feel like these lines may have caught you. At least for the fantastic moment you let your words out - I love 'em - always I do...

    {hugs}
    FAL1
     
  4. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    --If only I could understand the reflections in every grain of sand you harbour in your pockets deep they found their way as waters seep into and through your memories, why can't I see inside of me?--
     
  5. I think you see the beauty, wonder, and mystery in those surrounding you - and forget to see what abounds in you

    Mea Culpa
    FAL1
     
  6. oskeylov2007

    oskeylov2007 Guest

    that was so beautiful and touching. you have a great gift. i hope your pain subsides take care now -k-
     
  7. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    Pain has become the only reason I know I am alive.


    ~C
     
  8. *SIGH*
    Feel for you...

    I'm familiar...though my second worst nemesis is the absurd/the surreal it's so preposterous - also the story of my life.

    Bless your words Curtius

    {hugs}
    FAL1
     
  9. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    wow...

    another wonderful one...

    BP
     
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