Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by FoundAndLost1, Oct 7, 2006.

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  1. What madness takes over,
    and inspires the poet
    to describe the journey
    into Hell
    Is it expression
    of the Human Condition,
    or words of warning
    “Do not tread here”…
    Or to state that
    another has been
    where you now stand,
    and you have a witness

  2. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    ...good one!

    haunting as I prefer them....

  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Most excellent, FAL1!! I like it very much!:smile:

    It is Journey, Expression, and Assurance all in one lovely verse.:smile: :smile:


  4. ari

    ari Staff Alumni

    oh this solitary soul confined inside
    inspiration comes in mystic forms
    i am i the poet, are you that poet?
    is there a bit of poet in us all?
    what is to mean that it is able to feel you and yours?
    this human condition of suffering the hands of others
    do we not want people to tread here
    for the vaildity into freely given comfort and words passed along
    we all stand here
    I stand here
    there has been many that have stood in this stead
    yes we are all witness to this madness, this despairity
    hear the fatigue, it stares back at me like peering into a looking glass
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