Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by LittleSparkles13, Apr 26, 2007.

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  1. LittleSparkles13

    LittleSparkles13 Well-Known Member

    I wonder what I did to deserve this
    Was it something I did or didn’t do?
    All the time I wonder, whether I deserve to be here
    Because my life is such a mess, that I don’t know if I can be
    How can someone’s life be so hard?
    How can someone hate their life like I do?
    I want someone to actually understand
    I want someone to actually care
    I’m not a selfish person but I just don’t want to be alone
    Been alone all my life, I don’t want to be anymore
    But this is the way it normally is
    But does it have to stay this way forever.
  2. Blackness

    Blackness Guest

    I like this one too. I feel what you're saying, its all I want too. For someone to understand, lisen, care and to not be alone.
  3. LittleSparkles13

    LittleSparkles13 Well-Known Member

    Yeah, i know what it's like to be alone, i am usually alone. Thankyou for my comments and making my poetry noticed.
  4. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    Wow, what a treat 2 in one day!! Another absolutely well written poem! :hug:
  5. LittleSparkles13

    LittleSparkles13 Well-Known Member

    As i just pointed out my poetry has been here for a couple of months. Thankyou for your reply though. Greatly appreciated
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