Won't you please? (kill me) *trig*

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Shadowplay, Dec 5, 2006.

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  1. Shadowplay

    Shadowplay Staff Alumni

    "Won't you please? (kill me)"

    Filter out my impurities
    Through a ball of cotton please
    And when I'm clean and true
    Maybe I'll be good for you.
    Someday...

    Hold me down,
    Till I can't breath.
    Choke me out,
    Won't you please?

    Kill me. x4

    Commercial distortion of my mind
    Losing all of what I find
    Another word that rhymes with two
    ...With love from me to you.
    Get away...

    Hold me down,
    Till I can't breath.
    Choke me out,
    Won't you please?

    Kill me. x4

    Filter out my impurities
    Through a ball of cotton please
    And when I'm clean and true
    Maybe I'll be good for you.
    Someday...

    Hold me down,
    Till I can't breath.
    Choke me out,
    Won't you please?

    Kill me. x8
     
  2. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    Holy crap hun, that is the best song I ever read. I would love to hear it to actual music. BEAUTIFUL.
     
  3. Terry

    Terry Antiquities Friend Staff Alumni

    Fender...are u ok hun??? thats a worrying poem.
     
  4. Shadowplay

    Shadowplay Staff Alumni

    dont worry im fine.
     
  5. immure

    immure Account Closed

    i agree u got a gooder there.
     
  6. blub

    blub Guest

    Wow Kurt, wish I could hear you play this :eek:hmy: !!!
     
  7. Marshmallow

    Marshmallow Staff Alumni

    Ditto!!!!!! :eek:hmy:
     
  8. Shadowplay

    Shadowplay Staff Alumni

  9. kurt thats amazing..
    it really is..
     
  10. Bob26003

    Bob26003 Well-Known Member

    HaHa...... Good Job!

    Remind me of Nirvana.
     
  11. blub

    blub Guest

    Oh damn, can I be your groupie :eek:hmy:
    No just kidding :tongue:
    or not....:unsure:

    I really love it :wub:
     
  12. kindtosnails

    kindtosnails Staff Alumni

    :eek:hmy: i know your secret..mr cobain :laugh: i liked it :smile:
     
  13. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    wow...

    such great emotion...

    I really liked it so much

    BP
     
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