Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by ThornThatNeverHeals, Nov 15, 2012.

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  1. ThornThatNeverHeals

    ThornThatNeverHeals Well-Known Member

    simple words never cease
    to touch my soul
    to make a difference
    deep inside of me

    never forgetting
    all the hurt and painful
    tears cried and ghoses
    yet nothing so simply.

    kind words are so rare
    yet hold a special spot
    looking at kind words
    harder to accept compared

    it's hard to see there
    into the minds of others
    to know why it is said
    why its meant to touch and where

    never forget your words
    I feel so much inside
    everywhere for long periods
    longer than kindness stays the hurt.​
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  2. NYJmpMaster

    NYJmpMaster Have a question? Message Me Staff Member Forum Owner ADMIN

    It is a beautiful poem Thorn. The feelings left by kind words do not stay as long as by hurtful ones to be sure, but the intent and hope of those saying them is longer lasting. Often hurtful words are spoken in haste and without thought and are quickly forgotten by those who spoke them. People who use kind words have contemplated and actually mean them.

    Take Care and Be Safe

  3. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I understand your poem hun often i say words use them wisely because of the effect they do have on others hugs to you
  4. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    What a talented and insightful poem! As I said, you are a smarty...with much caring
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