World of gray(Colors)

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by mare, Jul 20, 2011.

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  1. mare

    mare Member

    Here are the lyrics to a song(i wrote them) that i did in the band,we don't play anymore.Maybe it is not the best but it means a lot to me.Leave your comments negative and positive.
    Here are the lyrics:

    The show is over
    I'm the only one left
    close the door
    and light a cigarette

    the story has ended
    there's no coming back
    i see the mirror
    all i see is a wrack

    chorus
    you know that i can change
    i know it all sounds strange
    to wait for a new day
    and add some color to the world of gray

    so look again in the big bright sky
    and watch my soul as it flies high
    and i say to all my friends
    this is where my story ends

    chorus
    you know that i can change
    i know it all sounds strange
    to wait for a new day
    and add some color to the world of gray x2
     
  2. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    I like the rhythm. I felt sad for part of it, but like the idea of adding colors to a world of gray. :) Nice!
     
  3. AlexElm

    AlexElm Well-Known Member

    O_O . I would've loved to hear your band play this!
     
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