Worried

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  1. welcome_home

    welcome_home Member

    Confused and worried I lie awake
    Cold and alone I sit and quake
    The sky outside is black and cold
    As I sit time grows old
    Everyone deserves their own special place
    Seems like I just take up space
    I could end it all with just one shot
    But I often think, “I better not.”
    Confused and worried I lie awake
    Cold and alone I sit and quake​
     
  2. Mya

    Mya Well-Known Member

    awsome poem
     
  3. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    I love your poem!!!!!! :eek:hmy: :hug:
     
  4. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member

    Simple, yet elegant. I like it.
     
  5. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    i agree with innerstrength...

    BP
     
  6. Allo..

    Allo.. Well-Known Member

    Thats beautiful..
     
  7. It's *NOT* beautiful!!!!!

    It's HEARTBREAKING!!!!!!!! And true

    I feel for you...


    FAL1
     
  8. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I've had similar feelings so can relate. The poem is simple and eloquent:smile: - but I don't like the feelings.:sad:

    least
     
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