wrote this a few weeks back*may triggr

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by mandyj101, Jun 23, 2009.

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  1. mandyj101

    mandyj101 Well-Known Member

    i stand here watching them walk by
    time passes..
    they are ovlivious 2 whats in the sky

    they dont notice me here
    mabye just maybe..
    they will do when im down there

    i wonder should i name and shame
    tell my story..
    so they can jus shrug and pass the blame

    or should i go without a word
    there will be no traces
    about what occured

    its my only option
    my heads spinning
    building up this emotion

    i wonder what use was my life
    there is nothing there
    im just a lowlife

    i dont care about here or beyond
    i have concluded why bother
    no one will respond

    so i say farewell
    to those who may read this
    decide they can go on and excell

    i have decided i cannot
    i feel its the end of the road
    to those few that ever cared i hope im not forgot

    u are all so talented .. i must admit i feel this isnt worthy of postin here.. but i wrote this down a few weeks back..thought id share..
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Brilliant poem hun,thanks for sharing. :)
  3. Remedy

    Remedy Chat & Forum Buddy

    You're very talented yourself, I enjoyed your poem. :arms: Sorry you're feeling so low at the moment though... I hope you feel a bit better soon. :hug:
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