You - Nameless

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  1. Black_Rose17

    Black_Rose17 Member

    I was inspired this morning and this is what I came up with:

    You - Nameless

    You torment me daily
    but you don't see the truth,
    I constantly tremble as I'm thinking of you.
    the pain that runs deep,
    the safety that I seek.
    though it only ends the same way.

    I wish I never knew you.
    I wish I didn't care.
    but things you say about me,
    take away my air.
    like clouds of smoke.
    it's hard to breathe,
    like a panic attack which I can not see.
    Behind close doors...
    you strike again.
    making me fight until the very end.

    I'm tired and I'm weak
    and I don't want to speak
    but people still ask:
    "Is this true?"
    You've made an impact..
    "the source of everything" fake not true
    but I promise you,
    one day no ones going to believe you.

    Yes, my life is alittle rough
    you've made that clear to everyone
    but my day is coming and I will be free
    but then,
    where will your comments be?


    Thank you for taking the time to read.
    † Black Rose †
     
  2. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    Great work, Black Rose...thanks for posting it...big hugs, Jackie
     
  3. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    that was a beautuful, well written poem

    Love BP
     
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Lovely poem :heart:
     
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