You were there

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  1. Smashed-Up-Sanity

    Smashed-Up-Sanity Well-Known Member

    You were there for my 1st breaths
    i was struggeling for air
    gasping for life
    You were there for my 1st breaths
    but will you be there for my last?

    You were there for my 1st words
    'No,No' i said
    No,No was all i heard
    coz everything was my fault
    You were there for my 1st words
    but will you be there for my last?

    You were there to see my 1st tears
    They were tears of helplessness
    and you were there to help
    Now my tears are of heart-ache
    I have come to reach my fate
    You were there to see my 1st tears
    but will you be there to see my last?

    You were there to hear my 1st giggles
    You saw a smile that was real
    and a laugh that you could feel
    You see a smile that is now fake
    and I see you about to break

    Im sorry mummy
    I didnt mean to hurt you
    I cant stand to see you like this anymore
    The tears in your eyes
    and i know we are both telling lies
    when we say 'I love you'

    I cant cause you any more pain mum
    I cant live like this
    I have to go

    Hold me for my last breaths
    Hear my last words
    See my last tears
    I wish you good luck
    Good-bye​


    You were there for my 1st breaths
    You were there for my 1st steps
    You were there for my 1st tears
    You were there for my 1st giggles
    You were there to hold me
    You were there to calm me
    You were there to kiss me
    You were there to hug me

    What happened
    We wew so close
    But still so distant
    From each others feelings

    You wernt there to hear about my friends ships
    (how very few i had)
    You wernt there to hear how my day was
    (how long and dark it was)
    You wernt there to help with my homework
    (and you wonder why i fail)
    You wernt there to hear about my problems
    (oh how many i had)
    You were there to watch me fade away
    You were there to point and laugh
    when i had a bad day
    You were there to call me names
    You were there
    ruining my life
    with out even knowing it

    Will you be there
    for my final breaths?
     
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