'you'

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by enditnow123, Aug 26, 2007.

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  1. enditnow123

    enditnow123 Member

    You
    By: Mills (me)


    He beats you
    He keeps you
    under his control

    I dont know
    why you still are
    with him when you could
    have a better man even if
    its not me

    I just want you to know
    that I will be here always
    for you

    I will help you with your troubles,
    your pains,
    your problems

    Just let me know
    when you need me
    and I will be there with you
    until the end

    for I still love you
    even though your not mine
    I just want the best for you
    so keep it on your mind
    that i am here when you need me
    just call and i will be there to hold you​
     
  2. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    End,
    This poem is very deep and emotional. It actually brought tears to my eyes. If you wrote this for someone then I hope you get to get that person back. It is a powerful poem and it pulls a person towards it. I hope to see more of your writing soon. Take care and I love you. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss


    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
     
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    I love it. :heart:
     
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